Zephyr

I added a link to this thread from your original thread: http://musescore.org/en/node/5567
for cross reference.

can't wait to hear this finished

I like it I do, but just some pointers:

More diversity please, you use far too many quarter notes, and ther's a lot of eighths as well.
Place the Violoncello higher in the mix. It has a soli for a few measures, but it's hard to hear on my speakers.
Lower some of the harmonies. There's some ugly reverberation on some of the higher notes. It's not a pleasant dissonance, if you know what I mean.

Otherwise it's a really fun and thematic piece and I hope to hear it when it's finished.