3rd orchestral Invention by MARTIN

THE ENDING IS PERFECT NOW!!!

The beginning is more cohesive&apparently coherent, the middle has good contrast it is all one field.Not a n aba construction it is impressionistic and tightly focused.The music per se is about the sound of a minor second later hallmarked in the passage with bassclarinet and trombone against 8th notes in the celesta. Will I want to show this to a professor one day.IS its construction tight and is it of any interest ?
I'm amazed that anyone tries to write in old fashioned harmony when so many sounds and new feelings and emotions have yet to be mined.Triadic and quartal harmony must be about how we live and feel and what we see now! Skycrapers and automobies do not sound like a triad unless you are a Strauss or Berg or Babbit and know how to score them in a new way!