My notation challenge

• Mar 23, 2022 - 01:56

As a guitarist who's not a piano player, I'm struggling with how to notate this for readability. Bar 8 in particular is kicking my butt in terms of what I should do. The LH E is duplicated by the right hand in the descending triplet line, but I'm not sure how to represent it. so it's playable. Open to any suggestions and critique from actual piano players on how to make this smooth.

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