"The Consort's Serenity" - Muse Sounds Excerpt

This is the complete version of an excerpt from a future symphonic work I'm writing (using the new Muse Sounds library). I posted an audio sample previously, but this is the complete and finished version of this excerpt (I'm hoping so at least, although I might need to make some edits and corrections later). I'd love to get some feedback on this piece, even some advice on what can improve it too. 😄

https://musescore.com/user/34196469/scores/8900010?share=copy_link

https://soundcloud.com/sigmawaveproductions/the-consorts-serenity?in=si…