Seaside Groove (Piano, Bass Guitar, Guitar, Drums)
My second shot at composing a short piece using MuseScore. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.
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I like all of your underlying themes, and it is good to see that they are properly developed and linked together, unlike much band music I hear (even my own!).
I agree with the idea of the guitars forming the main theme, or outlines, with the piano "shading in", but I personally think the piano could be made to perhaps sound a little fuller, being a pianist myself.
My only other critiscism is that I feel the drums could be varied more to add tension and climax, and then add an air of calm, so as to make the piece more varied in its dynamic.
Otherwise, a very good piece, keep it up!
Hope that helped,
H
I think it sounds more rich for the piano. It brings it out a little more.
Grrr.
In reply to Grrr. by Anonymous
I love it! I especially like the major triad at the end.
In reply to I love it! I especially like by musicandpancakes
Here is a revised version of the song. I tried to use as much feedback as possible from the comments. Tell me what you think!
In reply to Here is a revised version of by musicandpancakes
I much like the revised version, I personally think in sounds a little more stand out.
Well done,
H