Can I Get Some Feedback?
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Basically all my songs, the first one is cover though.
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http://musescore.com/user/81328
Basically all my songs, the first one is cover though.
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On Forest Interlude, you could add some more melody around measures 13/14, it sounds a tad empty there.
Measures 75+ sounds slightly bare, and a bit repetitive, not sure if you could touch that up, however it's not something that's too distracting or unappealing.
Otherwise, pretty good song, liked the jazzy feel of it, nice work.
F-Zergo was pretty good, a bit short though, so I assume it's a WIP.
Big Blue, didn't like it that much, considering it only covered one part of the song. If it included some of the other instruments, would've been much better. However, the melody was done very well.
Carnival sounded pretty good, not my taste of music, but that bias aside, it was pretty well constructed. Measure 32 had a neat feel to it that I liked.
Enjoyed Snow-fer a lot, very well done overall, haven't heard the actual song however, so I can't judge it on accuracy, but on sound alone, it's done very well.
In reply to Feedback by sihplak
Being a very long term fan of DKC, Forest Interlude absolutely did it for me. Congratulations, score sounds fantastic to me.
I only managed to bring up a few (unfinished) scores, so I can't comment on scores in general.
Cheers
I like your rhythm in "Carnival," it has a solid feel and you make good use of empty space, which is fantastic when done correctly. In this piece it's what really makes the song, for me anyway. One note - the end could have felt a little more... end-ish. I like the idea of just letting the drums end it, but it could have gone on another measure or so. The sudden effect is nice, though, so that's really a matter of opinion.
I like "Shump," it's a very jazzy tune. I does feel a bit rushed at times, and the rhythm has a tendency to fall a little... ahead of itself, if that makes sense. Again, if that's the desired effect, then well done, but it just isn't my taste personally.
Those are the only ones I've listened to for now, but when I get a chance I might come back and listen to the other ones. In general, I like your work!