My first complete solo song
This is my first COMPLETE solo song. It is only 12 measures and it isn't really that good, just a practice song at best :P
I would like feedback, though! Constructive criticism is great, just please don't be rude (if that makes sense :S)
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Please keep in mind, this is my first complete piece and it is not for performance, just for fun. :D
Not so sure that will get anywhere. But in the last beat of the last measure, I would change it to 16th note-16th rest-16th note-16th note or 8th note-16th note-16th note, not 16th note-16th note-8th note.
In reply to Eh... by Anonymous
Also, I am not trying to be mean or anything. I just would revise the ending and mabye tweak it a bit to make it flow better.
In reply to RE: Eh... by Anonymous
Thanks for the advice! I am just working on making songs sound okay to all add up to a big project I am working on for concert band. I edited the ending, if you want to look again.