My First Piece Ever

• Jun 1, 2011 - 21:37

This song has been rolling around in my head waiting to be turned into actual music for years. I finally found MuseScore and have finally attempted to put it in a format where it can be heard by others. (Especially since I sing very off key.)

What do you think? I'm eager for some feedback. ^_^

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I'd look for a couple of contrasting themes ("call and response" ideas) for the existing two-measure motif. Flesh it out a little bit, shift it up and down on the keyboard, things like that. When the same sequence of notes, at the same position etc, starts to be heard over and over, well, your ear just starts to focus too much on, "say, I've heard that before."

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