Allegro in F major

Woah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was awesome!!!!!!!
Really great piece, I like its musicality and all that. You're eleven?! Respects!
You should really continue your composing. You do have talent!

:) :) Excellent. I also listened to your piece 'Birdsong' - also excellent :)

Definitely a delightful piece!   Perhaps the only thing I’d consider doing to it is to have the pianist end the piece with a flourish!   (A quick roll of the right hand and “bonk!” in the left?)   After all, after the pianist has made it to the end of this piece (whew!), a bit of celebration is in order!   ;-)

The composition has good variety between the “A” and the “B” parts, without making the two of them seem unrelated.   The coda (so to speak) neatly incorporates elements of both, bringing the entire musical experience very tightly together to create a very satisfying ending.   I also enjoy how you vary the tonalities to keep things (very) interesting.

Congratulations, very well done, and keep writing!