Here are 2 of my compositions! PLEASE Give me feedback
I've only been writing music for a few months, but let me know what you think!
Angst (Full Band, Winds, Percussion)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7rh59MO7XIg
Confusion (Full band, Winds, Percussion)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z8-Gxh0kiHc
Comments
Bravo. You've got really good, creative ideas. It's all in pieces, so it's difficult to comment on structure, but I felt dissatisfied because the themes or motifs changed too quickly; I felt they were not developed and/or repeated enough, giving the music a feeling of incompleteness even within each fragment. Aside from that, I really like the way you've handled each individual idea. Good luck.