Fingering for Original Piano piece

I made a piano piece and I want to try and learn it but I'm not sure if I should use the fingering pattern that I came up with so I decided to upload the original file, post it on youtube for reddit and provide a link to the uploaded file to get feedback on what I should change so that my fingers don't die. Thank you in advance.

Musescore upload: https://musescore.com/user/174019/scores/4794181

Youtube upload: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Erj-eiDIt1I

Original file attached