My 3rd Composition - Canopy Dances

• Apr 21, 2010 - 01:38

my 3rd composition called canopy dances. a simple song with 5 instruments. PLZ COMMENT on hwo it is, im only 14 and i want to see if it's ok

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I'd say this shows a lot of promise. You seem to have a natural sense for creating interest by varying the rhythm and, particularly, the 'texture' by having different instruments carry the melodic line. I hope you continue with learning music. I think you will have a lot of fun.

Good luck!

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