oops with the file this time. Jolly piece for piano and violin
Hello,
This is my first go at notation software or even writing my music down at all.
I think the software is excellent, as with a little trial and error and no experience I've managed to produce pretty much what I had in mind and I'm someone who can barely work my mobile phone :-)
Hope some of you like it, thanks for listening and thanks to musescore for the software.
Stephen
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I've speeded it up, realized it was moving along too slowly to be jolly.
I would be interested in getting some feed back on the music but also on the notation presentation.
After the middle eight I wanted to gain momentum and end on C, where as each part ends on Fm, which sounds unresolved. At first I thought it might be nice to leave it like that but decided against it. I usually write songs and this probably will be one eventually.
It's arranged for violin and piano because my neices play those instruments and I hope it will be fun for them to play it.
Stephen
In reply to I've speeded it up, realized by stephnlawrnce
Thank you for sharing your song. I really enjoyed listening to it. On that note, I did not detect any unresolved parts and I think the tempo you ended up with works well for this type of song.
One thing I might consider changing is the loudness of the violin at measures like 10 & 11. In my opinion, the violin should have the melody in the later half of those measures and I don't hear it as clearly as I would like to.
All in all, great work. I'm sure your nieces will love this song.
Regards,
Asutori
In reply to Nice song by Asutori
Thanks Asutori,
Since I uploaded, I listened and thought the piano and violin were sort of fighting each other a bit and that there was too much reverb, so I adjusted the reverb and have the violin louder throughout. I think it sounds a lot better now.
Stephen