Feedback, Suggestion, layout improvements for String Symphony
Hello, my name is Daniel Nahoa Ani and I am a faithful user of Musescore. I love this software and composed a String Symphony and would like feedback, suggestions, and most importantly notes on how I can improve my formatting, system space, etc.
String Symphony No. 1 Movt. 1 (Glory to God alone) - https://musescore.com/danielnahoaani/string-symphony-no-1-movt-1-glory-…
Sincerely,
Daniel Nahoa Ani
Comments
1. I can say that some tempo changes are needed. (I think the entry should be fast as it should be. A little slower and faster tempos are needed in the middle sections. )
2. I think that the harmony is a bit monotonous. (For such a very ambitious title.) To overcome this, you went to the key changes. But I think it's not enough.
3. It does not seem like a finished work. It's more like 2 or 3 different parts taken and put together. These parts are self-evident. You can expand them easily. Thus, this work can be divided into 3 sections.
After all: It seems to be a beginning of a hopeful work. You should pay more attention to the content than to try to overcome something with nuances. It will be much better if you continue to work on it.
Good luck.