My Dream; Farewell

• Jan 24, 2011 - 20:53

My 1st composition. I am quite satisfied with it considering the fact that I have NEVER composed ANYTHING. Tell me what you think.

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Not bad to be your first composition.try conecting more the themes of the song.it's good melodies you have but make them say something,not put them at ramdon.
Keep doing.
Bye

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