Score needs Suggestions and Improvements

• Dec 27, 2022 - 23:07

Hello everybody!

Thanks to some help I was able to be sent an uncorrupted score. After hours of no sleep yesterday and finally transferring over the other parts to the main score, I was able to finish.

Now, I am hoping for feedback from measures 1 through 50 to improve how this will sound if performed by a mixed choir. It is my dream to have this performed in the spring as a tribute to memories, friends, and people who I have to thank for so much.

Please, any suggestions or help would be appreciated.

Thanks!

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• Dec 28, 2022 - 00:53

This is a wonderful piece, and should be performed.

I am confused by what I see and hear in the organ parts. It's hard to say if the problem is in the file, or just how my system is rendering it. MS4 does have some interesting problems. When I panned one organ part hard left and the other hard right, I could begin to pick them out better. In general, the organ parts up an octave tended to get lost. And many of the eight note patterns became eight and two sixteenth patterns. Keyboards serving as pipe organs have 6,8, and 4 foot stops, as you know. Which I think is the sound you are after. If you also pan the choir parts, they will become clearer also.
I'm not sure it is necessary to double any of the choir parts on the organ in this first 50 measures. Let the choir have the glory.
Nice job.

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