Please comment on my first composition
At the age of 71, I am writing my first piece of music. I have written a lullaby tune for a children's poem I used to read/sing to my children and I have begun composing a piano accompaniment and would welcome any and all comments on the tune and/or the start of the piano part.
I have no formal musical education, and have no idea how many rules and conventions I am breaking.
Thanks in advance,